It's so good! It's kinda rough at the start due to the MC's personal feelings and setbacks but it honestly enhanced the whole fic even more because of how real it feels. I mean, you don't just wake up in a fictional world without getting existentially conflicted right? Anyways, it has really good dialogue, pacing is a bit weird at times, and the MC so far is likable. Keep up the great work! [img=recommend]
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