the only problem in this novel is that some things dont make sense. ill go into details later, you should find one of them in ch 10 and another few in earlier chapters i think i commented on them.
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LIKERamiro_Estrada_1907:About the story or the grammar? Cause if it's about the story that's nothing I can do, I'm just translating this. Btw I'm not a pro translator, just an otaku.
at least you do it better than several, I always see that many character names change, here it is seen that you make an attempt not to change names and it is better understood, that is appreciated
Ramiro_Estrada_1907:About the story or the grammar? Cause if it's about the story that's nothing I can do, I'm just translating this. Btw I'm not a pro translator, just an otaku.