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Krysbe
KrysbeLv131yr
2023-01-03 04:57

Nearly 200 chapters in, and if you like crossdresser stories, this one has a lot of potential. Overall, the plot and spreed of plot development are great There's a good mix of action, comedy, and tragic moments. I only have a few constructive criticisms about the author. 1. They need an editor as the grammar is sometimes difficult (English may not be the author's first language). 2. The author tends to forget that the reader has not been informed of a time progression (i.e., one chapter it's raining and midday but the next while still in conversation, it's dark and clear). 3. My final constructive criticism is about the world creation: At this point in time it seems the author might be doing some minor retcon in the rules of the world by adding magic. I'm curious to see where this goes. Honestly, if the author gets an editor (I'm happy to volunteer), this story would be AMAZING 😍 Even with the existing grammar, it's still a very enthralling and EXCELLENT story and I'm always looking forward to more.

Crown Prince's Knight Is A Girl?!

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bishop1275
bishop1275Lv4

Another great story in the making from the creative mind of our Creator, bravo. I am already looking forward to the adventures of Olivia and Ophelia. I love Olivia's character, a strong-willed girl and determined to survive, not only thinking of herself but wanting to protect her little sister. Good luck with the book. I know your hard work will once again pay off.

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LuffyLucy
LuffyLucyLv5

Aaaaaahh can I say what brought me here was the cover pic? 🙈 but after reading the story I am hooked here for good 💘 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
TC_Liyanage1
TC_Liyanage1Lv15

great story by a great author. I recommend everyone to give this a read ^^ good luck author, keep up the good work. can't wait to see more updates!!

2yr
StumblingtoSuccess
StumblingtoSuccessLv11

Interesting premise. Need more. You are doing a very good job and the people reading this. You guys should give this one a try. Good luck and have fun.

1yr
maan_salamat
maan_salamatLv4

this story is brilliantly crafted. i love the characters, especially that of Olivia or Oliver..super funny...

1yr
ossai_rhoda
ossai_rhodaLv1

is it just me or is this cover photo not for SCHOOL HUNK IS A GIRL. just want to be sure. Nice story but I think you should change the cover photo, someone else would think you are pirateing the story. nice story though.

2yr
MiaSilver
MiaSilverLv14

The novel begins with sorrow and loss which already rouses obstacles and struggles for Ophelia and Olivia. The two sisters are in for adventures that will come their way. I personally like the moulding of Olivia's strong character as she tries to ascertain authority in order to protect her sister. Ophelia appears more docile and sombre while Olivia is quick-witted and strong-willed, therefore their personalities contrast. overall the author has shown a commendable command of the flow of the story. I recommend it to new readers to engage this progressing piece. Best of Luck to the author.

2yr
be_happy_always12
be_happy_always12Lv4

love this book so much❤️🔥 keep up the gud work author !!❤️❤️

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riemc
riemcLv15

I loved this book from the start! The characters conpelling and the story fulll of twists and turns. If you want a real page turner, this is the book for you. Another entertainjng novrl from this great author!!

1yr
Taruna_Singh_2668
Taruna_Singh_2668Lv5

came across this after reading the other book i only care about Duke's prince loved it love the style author waiting for more updates cheers to you

1yr
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