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2022-08-18 11:01

The story line flow from one scene to the next is choppy. You can guess what the writer is trying to say but it’s better if it flow naturally. Also, what mother would leave their 5 year old children at home by themselves? It not like she doesn’t have the money to pay for it. C’mon

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