Review Detail of sarahdreamer in The Longest Promise To Love

Firstly, congratulations on winning bronze for the book. I am so amazed by your writing. Yue is so awesome. She fits into every aspect of female lead... Strong yet emotional, lovely yet ferocious. I think she is gonna be the best female lead. I love her so much. Muchen's character is yet to open up but I guess he is going to be a real gem of a person in this book. The story is awesome. First, two chapters blew my mind as she ask for what I would have never expected after reading the name of the book. Those chapters are tremendous and the whirlwind that started after the third chapter is still continued. I love the action and a bit of horror in between. I love this book in first few chapters, Author_Twilight, continues writing this book. I want to know what happens in their life. I want to know if Muchen is the only cultivator or more to Yue because in the synopsis you said there is more suspense in Yue's character. I want to know all that. Your story is promising. Start updating soon. I am waiting for your update.