Obligatory author review! Pros and cons, QnA and something else Pros: No ha- rem 1st person Decent sized chapters Slice of Life(until something) (Trying to make em) >2D charas NO SYSTEM(despite what the reviews say 😭) Cons- If irl stuff happens, I’ll miss updates Not fully slice of life Story Pacing Overall, this + synopsis should give you a good outline of how this’ll go

First off, I want to say my taste in wns is like a kid who only wants to eat MC Donald's. Interpret that how you want, but the basis is I don't normally read wns that are more slice of life focused. I'll start with what I like. The MC feels very real and has made me smile with his choice and accidental actions on more than one occasion in the first 2 chapters. I didn't see any grammar errors and the sentences felt smooth. To top it off, I'm a big fan of first-person novels. I think they are harder to right well, and the author has done a great job. Now to the criticism. While it does a good job of expressing who the MC is, I felt pushed away when the MC played video games for a combination of almost an entire chapter. While the results were quite funny to me and almost made the time spent playing the video games worth it, they were then rushed and confusing. After the MC woke up, I thought I had skipped a page or something. I'd have also appreciated it if Feng Qing's actions and how they met up were explained more than a joke about plot armor.

Book Title: The Young Master’s Idol Agency (Aimzay) Chapters 5/5 as of 5/29/22 Plot: Good Plot is a unique concept for a novel, Dude reincarnates into a web novel as a mob trash character. He then gets kicked out of his home for reasons. And meets the novels protagonist by accident. He notices she is trying to make money from streaming. And rationalizes that he can conquer the world by using Vtuber culture and the bombshell of an FL. Story flow: Convoluted Chapters are short, and pacing is a bit too fast. As in fast. Half the time I was lost what was happening. But overall, its only the 1st few chapters and the breezing through was to setup the main chunk of the novel the Vtuber culture. With Chapter 5 being the 1st taste, it appears like a awkward fit but we need to see where the author intends to lead us with this story. Favorite Chapter: Chapter 4 Ally Acquired? We finally met our MC. Beautiful and powerful as a cultivator. Straight to a fault and is wholly likable and proceeds to give her background she is struggling financially and trys to make money by streaming. She is not doing well. Luckily we have the MC. Favorite Character: Feng Qing Beautiful female lead, powerful cultivator and streams. Lol what is not to like. 3 things I liked 1. Vtuber Cultivator A very unique concept as cultivators is known to withdraw for cultivating sessions for long periods of time. However, them being arrogant individuals with loads of things to show off does in deed match being a vtuber. 2. Cultivators with Technology Another interesting concept, technology allows people to do thing beyond their normal capabilities. Cultivators improve their bodies and minds towards to limit to increase its ability. When would Cultivators use technology and when would they not. 3. TheSe*er Dude has a line in the novel, but is extremely noteworthy and hilarious, not for everyone though. 3 Things I didn't like 1. Short chapters Chapters are extremely short. Not enough to go on per chapter. 2. Pacing is too fast Pacing is very fast, not sure if its due to wanting to get to the good bits, but at 5 chapters the number of changes in chapter 1 to 3 are almost the entire plotlines of some books. 3. No background information on cultivation The concept of Vtuber Cultivators is the selling point, but not enough info is given for the cultivation aspects. Hard to follow or understand if the characters are strong or not. Actual review Unique concept and interesting premise, grammar and style of writing is good. Pacing for 1st 5 chapters is lightning fast. Will need to see if promise for meshing of Vtuber world and cultivation worlds are good.

Writing Quality- 9/10 Updating Stability- 1/10 Story Development- 9/10 Character Design- 10/10 World Background- 9/10 Overall an amazing book! It has all the elements I look for while reading any web novel! I highly recommend this gem to everybody and anybody!

Chapters read: 5/5 Writing Quality: Pretty good its easy to read and it flows nicely Updates: ... Development: The plot seems a bit over the place at the start, but i guess its more of a gag type of approach? Character Design: Gorgeous Cover mate, also from what I have seen so far I have high hopes! World Background: Cultivation + Sci-Fi + Livestreaming ... amazing combo.

Great start, I already find my self laughing when Mc said something about find a toothbrush😂😂. Well I can see great potentials, so keep up the good work author

The novel is interesting and the slice of the little comedy was good. It's entertaining to red knowing how straightforward the MC..Overall I like this novel! thank you for writing this author!!

The chapters are clean and I can't see a typo it's my first time reading a story about cultivation but im sure that it's unique to any of the cultivation plots that I read before 5/5 on everything except updating stability 3/5 in looking forward for the next chapters

This is a really good story, what's nice about it is its characters, the writing quality is good yet could use a little bit of editing, there is not much to say about the story as yet since it only just started but from it, i can tell you that i will be good.