Review Detail of Arbogast_April in Talent Swallowing System

writing seems good but their is basically no story about the MCs life unless you want to read over dozens of chapters for a little hint here and there. the world and characters are cliche and you dont feel any emotion from them. ik they are fictional characters but with good writing you should be able to get a feel for their emotions but you cant. ps: your grammers good and i can tell you had a decent idea but had poor execution. keep up the work and improve also have a good life. i wish you the best of luck.