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Mohamed_Gouda
Mohamed_GoudaLv22yr
2022-05-13 04:27

Amezing world build if you can add kingdombuild to this novel one green plant or blue plant or both will be greet and if you can add 2 chaper per day

My portal to the futuristic world

Mysterious_nature
4.4
32 Chs

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Mysterious_nature
Mysterious_natureAuthor

Hello, I am the author. Please comment and review if you like it. thank you for your support and also give some suggestions if you have any.

3yr

Samina_Nazir
Samina_NazirLv3

Yes the book deserve 5stars.The mc is little naive for now but everything workout good.Author just keep in mind to not show any discrimination in the future as it could have negative effect on the novel.Overall i like the slice of life and buisness building novels so its is on my fav list.

2yr
DaoistN334
DaoistN334Lv1

So far good👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3yr
Ash_ketchum_7148
Ash_ketchum_7148Lv3

well I like this story and even the plot but the updating stability is truly bed it's been like one month since I am been waiting for a new chapter but there is still no update to it well anyway I wanted to ask if any of you seen the same kind of Novel like this in which a boy got a portal in his bathroom ( and this is for author bhai thoda jaldi karna maybe Punjab ke pass rahata hun aur mujhe yah story janni hai Tum Jo Tera Ghar Bata de main vahan a jaunga ya FIR upload karna shuru kar de no offence but thoda jaldi karo kafi time se vate kar raha hun itna bada review to maine jindagi mein nahin likha sirf tu ek pass Rahane wala isliye likh raha hun anyway agar tujhe dusre novel ke bare mein kuchh pata hai to batana ) well I don't know if you are from Punjab or not but I believe you are because you have used this novel if you are Indian you should understand what I have written

2yr
thor5566
thor5566Lv2

Good work keep it up.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
The_Force_313
The_Force_313Lv1

It is the story of an average person getting a portal to the technological world, up to the 17th chapter, there is no young master, no scheming, just a boy starting his business with robots. Update of one chapter is very slow. I need at least 10 chapters a day. Need more, update fast. Grammar and connotation are slightly misplaced but the overall story and character development are good. There isn't much to think about, the story is straightforward and enjoyable to read.

2yr
Fito
FitoLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
DaoistS307
DaoistS307Lv1

Good story so far. Keep it up and update more. There are some punctuation writing mistakes other wise good overall. It doesn't seem like English is your 3rd language.

2yr
Thunder_Bird661
Thunder_Bird661Lv1

I love Sci-fi stories. It is still startlet, but still good. It isn't a complex story in which I have to remember things. The story is easy to follow. Love the story so far. keep it up

2yr
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