great story, but I unfortunately had to put it down due to the constant grammar and spelling errors, every paragraph either has an additional word in it that's useless, or a misspelled word, it completely breaks immersion for me, good job coming up with a good story author but you need to find a good editor
PancakesWitch
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LIKEPancakesWitch:the first hundred or so chapters were edited already, but i guess the editor wasnt good enough lol