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I like the premise of the story and the starting lineup but there is confusion for what is Krilo in different chapters and who specifically is talking as he seems to be both human and summoned beast but no clear distinction on background yet these 23 chapters could turn into 50 if the pace was more drawn out and expanded on
The Strongest Battle Pet Reincarnation of a Bard
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hmm maybe I didn't give enough clues and proper grammar in the time transitioning. thank you for the input. Chapter 11 - 14 is the timestamp of Krilo's past live as a human. As for the potentially drawn out chapter, yes it is possible. But personally, I am not really a fan of a long orientation and tension building without a major climax. Thank you for the review