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2022-05-18 02:28

Oh boy do I have things to say about this. First of all the novel, barely has any grammatical mistakes or at least not many I've noticed. The concept itself was quite interesting, he started as a detective to find his parents and even know I bet that would be good goal in completing the tower. Although chapter 8 gives me similar vibes as tower of god, I think there chapter was delightful. It feels as though that's the chapter where things are now starting. Even the detective part was quite entertaining, although I did guess that Marie was behind it. I'll be honest this has plenty of potential and I would encourage the author to continue. I can hardly find any faults in the novel to be honest , I recommend y'all to try.

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thank you very much for reading my novel kind sir

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