Review Detail of Enchants in The Currency System

Hey Author! You said you were looking for feedback so I figured I'd give my 2 cents. This is all in good faith. The writing quality of this novel is not great. It reads very much like a shopping list of events rather than a story, which minimizes any emotions we're supposed to feel. The main thing that could be improved is how fast-paced everything is. For example, there's nothing being shown about the sister leaving her brother for the very first time to go to a sect. surely that'd be an emotional moment All that being said, however, I think you've got something special. Webnovel readers can often see past writing imperfections but when it comes to power systems or cheats, we're a very logical bunch. We want a cheat to be used effectively, we want our power systems consistent, and most importantly we want our cheats FUN. This is your best point, the system is very fun to read about which makes all the writing imperfections not really matter. I don't care if I don't have any attachments to the characters if the cheat is fun. Him creating these "clones" for lack of a better word and using them is super entertaining to read about. Writing skills can be improved with practice but coming up with a fun world/power system/cheat is something that a LOT of authors mess up and at least from this novel you've got that down pat.