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Sneakycat098
Sneakycat098Lv22yr
2022-06-20 00:53

So far I believe the writing quality needs to be upgraded, especially in the second para, it looks more like a script than a novel. It lacks expressions and elaboration of event details. Although I've read only intial chapter I think there's a lot of potential in this plot and this novel can be improved if author uses precise usage of words accordingly. Other than that, I found it pretty engaging and I wish the author all the best

A BILLIONAIRE'S TRUST GAME

binni_seon
4.7
32 Chs

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binni_seon
binni_seonAuthor

thanks you for the inputs,i voluntarily chose the style of narration to look like a script to give my readers the freedom to imagine the MC and her world a bit,please go through other chapters as well...thank you for your time and review,keep supporting,let us all grow together

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I really love the entire concept of having unfinished business, to me it brings so much depth into the story. Not only am I concerned with the deception that had occurred on their past I am also very interested in weather things will work out this time... The female lead has such a deep feeling for the things around her and this personally made me feel many of her emotions along with the events around her. I love it❤️ I also enjoyed the world building, it made feel as if I were in the room with her at each point in time.

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The story is capable of capturing the attention of readers. A little emotion is lacking in the story that could help bring more flare and help the reader feel more attached to the characters, but otherwise the I'm just loving it.

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The storyline is interesting and it piqued my interests. The story development and character development is good. It's definitely worthwhile to give it a reading. Looking forward to more. Keep up the good work author

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To my surprise, I remembered a scene from the Korean film Extreme Job as soon as I saw the chapter on chicken restaurants. Okay, so without further ado, the first issue that worried me was that too many new people were introduced in the first few chapters. As a result, my brain's memory capacity, which wasn't very high, to begin with, became overloaded trying to keep track of all of the new faces. That is the one thing that disturbs me about it. Other than that, everything else is fantastic, and I want to know how their story progresses. If I may ask, would you consider this a romance novel? I can't seem to find the tag.

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smiling_osha
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I really appreciate your work. The Characters depict love and intrigue readers to get more involved in them. The plot of story is amazing. Keep up the good work. I will highly recommend this book to the new readers looking for a great content.

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Amazing and unique storyline, novel so far is quite intriguing. Characters are very well written and described. I can see potential in this novel. All the best!

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The story plot is quite interesting, entertaining, and enticing with no grammatical errors and also with interesting characters. It was definitely a read for me.

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The story is well written and easy to read. Good work author. Can't wait for the next chapters. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

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