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Jabyyn_Turner
Jabyyn_TurnerLv142yr
2022-06-04 03:03

it takes to chapter 9 for you to actually get a plot like where he starts to move and it's not just system notifications and even then it's still not a lot of the story it's very slow and it's kind of annoying I almost describe it as a slow burn for the action because there is none it's his servants talking behind his back and him getting points for it like I don't know how long it takes before he starts to fight back

I'm Leveling Up Too Quickly

Safe Sincerity
2.7
1064 Chs

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Golden
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Reveal spoiler

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Rhongomynaid
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I'm not sure what direction this novel is heading in, this is a peculiar read. The whole gimmick with this novel is despite being very generic it has a gimmick. There are system notifications for ever minor thing the protagonist does and these system notifications come with points that automatically strengthen the protagonists realm regardless of his will. The protagonist doesn't like this because his father, the emperor is a crazy jealous person and if he finds out, our protagonist is toast. A large portion of the words in this novel are just system notifications which makes this novel feel weirdly shorter than it is, it feels like gimmicky word count filler. This novel doesn't really have much going for it apart from it's bizarreness, there isn't anything about it that still feels new after the first 5 or so chapters. There isn't enough depth to it for it to be very interesting so I'm rather lukewarm on this one. 2/5.

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Zackking
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Ok I’ looking forward to this novel and I hope this novel doesn’t disappoint me

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1996611q
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Read it till MC gets recruited into the Poison Sect. Don’t like how the MC suddenly left his harem, like when other princes were eyeing his harem MC blows his cover in order to protect them but a few chapters later when he became King he abandons them to go with his aunt to cultivation sect.

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Sleeping_Fox_UwU
Sleeping_Fox_UwULv4

Basically a trash... all those fking points yet he can't increase that fked up concealment shi t ... and complain about not having points to increase... and the author is literally a dog fker that doesn't even explain any fk he's writing... this is one of the worse type of novels... no offense to any authors... but this type of novels authors are a disgrace...

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Dragon_Watcher
Dragon_WatcherLv15

the author is shamelessly writing about nothing. The premise might sound funny or interesting but, I managed to push through 19 chapters and found nothing. Every chapter keeps repeating the tree wants to stay still but, the wind blows. This was garbage and whoever wrote this scam should feel bad.

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Sans_7676
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The realms descriptions are very detailed, and the story is slightly more unique than usual, so overall it's a pretty enjoyable novel. Idk how the trial reads work, but i hope this gets picked

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reading1dao1god
reading1dao1godLv7

Repetitivo de mais, ele passou 15 capítulos na mesma coisa, uma coisa horrível de ser ler, não sei como aguentei tanto tempo, é a pior história que já li.

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resins
resinsLv15

Invested too much not to finish it but a difficult read towards the end.

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