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Fluffnstuff
FluffnstuffLv141yr
2024-01-09 06:35

When considering a word to sum up this novel, the word, lame, comes to mind. The initial performance wasn't bad. I had high hopes, but the experience was a letdown. A vampire story that is loaded with political intrigue that isn't intriguing at all. Also, it was filled with super annoying females, and a very slow to develop, and lacking MC. I just don't feel like there is any good climax, and it falls flat. I even looked elsewhere to skim over 100 chapters to see if there is an improvement in the story. Nope, still lots of inept attempts at political intrigue and annoying females. 😑 Not my kind of story.

The First Vampire

Carrot On Weighing Scale
4.1
734 Chs

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SugarGodno1
SugarGodno1Lv4

That seems like a you problem my guy

1yr
Fluffnstuff
FluffnstuffLv14

Of course, man. It's a review. It's my opinion. If you like the political intrigue and the female characters suit your fantasies, you can write a review about it. I would suggest reading 100 plus chapters to get a good taste of it, though.

SugarGodno1:That seems like a you problem my guy
1yr
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SugarGodno1
SugarGodno1Lv4

Nah u were right , i dropped it. It wasn’t my cup of tea also, lol. Mc just didnt have his own agency , he was forced in side characters plot.

Fluffnstuff:Of course, man. It's a review. It's my opinion. If you like the political intrigue and the female characters suit your fantasies, you can write a review about it. I would suggest reading 100 plus chapters to get a good taste of it, though.
1yr
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Miechol
MiecholLv14

Same, pretty much him being vampire doest't add anything to this novel.

1yr
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Wylden_Bond
Wylden_BondLv15

I feel bad for you guys that didn't take the time to genuinely read the novel and just skimmed. You won't get another response from me.

1yr
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louisjacq
louisjacqLv15

It's already translated until chapter 97 under the name The original Vampire. Go on novelupdates. It's not the first time that a novel is re translated 😔

2yr

SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv14

✨💫SOUND INTERESTING🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔...THE ending of the synopsis with the "Holy Water" things attracted me, so I'll give it a chance💫✨🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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Lovely_Lalibey
Lovely_LalibeyLv5

Tbh, it started off good and intriguing, with him experimenting and learning more about his powers/vampire identity while still having to deal with the political mess that comes with being reincarnated into a Baron's son. His character gradually didn't become my cup of tea but one thing about him is that he's determined to accomplish his goal no matter the cost. Now, I would be fine with the storyline if at around 130 chapters or so, he didn't choose to cheat. Like he literally keeps a powerful mistress because he wants to use their heir to consolidate his power. That's my bottomline. I was already a bit put off with the FL appearing so early into the story only to not be the only one. He didn't feel an ounce of guilt and First FL is just naive and treated like/is a powerful flower vase in my opinion. I don't want to jump to conclusions, but this is a common trope in male-centered (and authored) novels that annoys me. It's already steering towards a harem for me. I guess I should have read the tags before starting the novel.Only staying for the political plot and more discoveries about his bloodline powers.

1yr
Isaac_Hillman
Isaac_HillmanLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
SeventhLord
SeventhLordLv5

The translation quality is actually pretty good. The MC isn't stupid and is slightly paranoid but willing to take risks. Characterization is consistent. Somewhat generic, but it's more like a KR western fantasy than the standard CN western fantasy.

2yr
MarekV1
MarekV1Lv1

Raw pls ?(◔‿◔). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .

3yr
Sylex
SylexLv4

it's actually good? first time I see a good Chinese novel about western topics, I really hope it will be picked up then some cliche generic novel

2yr
Lahumn_Harobs
Lahumn_HarobsLv11

an interesting and intriguing read, quite enjoyable n thrilling. if u are one up for thrills and danger just curl up with this book and be transported to the mersmerizing dangers and fantastic plot of the book

3yr
Dextuary
DextuaryLv6

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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