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The plot is really refreshing,the character design and world building are great.Although as a reader i want to know more about the world expecting you add elaborate details in the further chapters,great work..keep writing...eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters
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Thank you for your kind words. I will be adding more about the world around them. In my first book I elaborated a lot about the world. Was told by an editor it was too much . So I scaled back in my second book. Got the same response . So this one I was trying to do a little less but I think I’ve gone to far so I will be editing some chapters and adding.