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Although there were only three chapters, there was already slight development in the story. Those four girls, I found them adorable as well, with their different personalities. As for the world background, it was still vague, but the descriptions were alright! I also want to point out that to readers like me, long paragraphs aren't attractive. If possible, can you divide a long paragraph into short ones? I mean, it is unnecessary, particularly if it's really needed to be in a long paragraph, so you don't really need to do this. It's just my personal preference, after all. I'm just used to reading that type of stories. Keep it up! You're doing great with the storyy!

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enjoy the updates 😁

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What an awesome suggestion. Thank you! I will definitely try to work on cutting the paragraphs down a bit. I have typed all of this on my computer so it looks a bit different. haha. I look forward to improving for my readers! Thanks a bunch!