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Review Detail of AMonarch in Whispers of 4 Sisters

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AMonarch
AMonarchLv22yrAMonarch

Phenomenal writing quality, there's definitely nothing lacking there. Author is new so stability of updates is unknown. Story is quite interesting but there are currently only 3 chapters so there's much to come and I have high hopes for that. Now for the single thing that seemed to bother me while reading was the lack of description to background. Fixing that could increase how good this novel is by so much. Now for advice. Author seems new to writing so I want to give some tips since it's annoying figuring this out on your own. Add 10 tags to your novel, this apparently helps novels gain more attention. Next, when you title a chapter, never title it "chapter..." because when it is being read, it'll print as "Chapter '...:' Chapter '....'" because webnovel already tells the reader what chapter it is so I would recommend titling each chapter with a single word to describe the chapter. Hope this helps and good luck author!

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Whispers of 4 Sisters

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Enchanted_HPSAuthorEnchanted_HPS

enjoy the updates

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Enchanted_HPSAuthorEnchanted_HPS

Thank you so much for the feedback. I have 16 chapters written already and ongoing. I'll be posting daily for the next few weeks. Once I get the hang of Webnovel, I'll get a more clear schedule down! I really appreciate the suggestions and support .I will definitely be working on fixing some of this. Thanks for reading!

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Enchanted_HPSAuthorEnchanted_HPS

I will do so now! Thank your

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