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thefirespeaksLv112yr
2022-05-03 11:36

Although there were only three chapters, there was already slight development in the story. Those four girls, I found them adorable as well, with their different personalities. As for the world background, it was still vague, but the descriptions were alright! I also want to point out that to readers like me, long paragraphs aren't attractive. If possible, can you divide a long paragraph into short ones? I mean, it is unnecessary, particularly if it's really needed to be in a long paragraph, so you don't really need to do this. It's just my personal preference, after all. I'm just used to reading that type of stories. Keep it up! You're doing great with the storyy!

Whispers of 4 Sisters

Enchanted_HPS
4.8
27 Chs

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Enchanted_HPSAuthor

What an awesome suggestion. Thank you! I will definitely try to work on cutting the paragraphs down a bit. I have typed all of this on my computer so it looks a bit different. haha. I look forward to improving for my readers! Thanks a bunch!

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enjoy the updates 😁

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Thanks for stopping by! I hope you enjoy the story. I will be uploading chapters daily. Please feel free to leave a review and let me know what you think!

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Angel_King_1030
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Fantastic read. Captivating story line. Author has a fun way of writing that keeps you turning pages. Can't wait for more chapters. 😊😊😊😊 If the author puts out new books, is be interested in reading them also.

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Amanda_Whitacre
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Exciting read cant wait to read more. Has a great story line. Author writing skills are excellent! Chapters are full of content. Cant wait for more chapters to come out !

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The_Weary_Traveler
The_Weary_TravelerLv2

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! By far my favorite reads and there’s still more to come! Characters have such the personalities! Adventure on every page! The type of story you can cuddle up in a blanket on a rainy day with a hot drink. YOU WONT BE DISAPPOINTED!!! An absolute MUST read!!! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

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_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3

Very very unique story l must say..... l've mever seen this kind of story before and so the synopsis caught my eyes and give it a try...... Now it has really make me interested..... Good job author.....keep going....it a very promising story that everyone must try....

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13Rose_Wolfe13
13Rose_Wolfe13Lv1

Amazing story! I can not wait for more chapters. The author did an awesome job writing this and captivating the audience. I could not stop reading.

2yr
AryaShadowblade
AryaShadowbladeLv1

Such a great story. Once I started, I couldn't stop. It has an intriguing plot. It's relatable. It's written very well. Great job, author! Can't wait to read more.

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Daoist1eSo1S
Daoist1eSo1SLv1

The story is about sisterhood, i really enjoy that the background information the author gives really makes you sit up in your seat. Normally i'm not a fantasy genra typa reader but this story caught my eye and im in love, i would love to see how this continues to play out❤.

2yr
Lizabelle88
Lizabelle88Lv5

The novel is about sisterhood and the girls personalities are well detailed. I like their adventures. Their contacting personalities were both hilarious and admirable. It's a fun and entertaining novel to read. Story development is awesome and writing quality is great. Well done, Author! Keep it up!

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