Review Detail of Cloakedinshadow in Death Defied

In a typical fashion, I (the author) shall be leaving my newest work a 5-star rating. This is a work I'm genuinely passionate about, it doesn't follow the normal cliches and is inspired by a great discussion I had. I hope you guys stick around and see what I've got in store for you guys. I also hope to not let you down. Regardless, like my work or not all the best to you. If you could leave a comment of some sort to help inform of what I can improve on that would be great. I'm an aspiring writer and this is a way for me to get better. I also hope that my audience understands that I am but one person and I too am prone to making mistakes. Thank you very much for your time.