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This novel has many things different from the canon. The grammar is good than many other fan-fics out there and there won't be any harem in this novel

review after chapter 14 ~~ . Perfect way to introduce yami to academy.The fights, the emotions, everything is great. . I'd prefer if he has more friends.... and hanabi too.... . overall 7/10 as there are no grammar mistakes or other emo or power hungry mc... although romance & story development is yet to be seen...

hmmm.. the idea is great actually, but the execution is kinda meh, the mc is smart(most of the time) author also forcefully stop the mc from using his devouring ability to make the mc less powerful but still makes him op anyway while being young as 9 years old i find him specially dumb when he killed the village elders and kabuto when he didnt put the corpse in a scroll or something to absorb for later and allowed kimimaro to take kabuto's corpse when he could 1 hit kill kimimaro. i find it dumb and cringe when suddenly yami fought itachi and kisame in front of the 2 sage and the jonins of konoha on chapter 191 when he's clearly aware of the uchiha past. i hope they kill iitachi nd kisame on the following chapters to mess with the novel more but that's less likely to happen. imagine weakened itachi and kisame fighting jiraiya, asuma, kakashi, kurenai, yami that can toy with them and they survive. i felt like i wasted my time reading this and was disappointed with what happened. I don't have enough braincells to read the following chapters to know why the author did it so goodluck to other readers.

I can't take it anymore, 26 chapter and dropped🙃 The story and idea starts out good, but it's turning more and more cringe and cliche. Idk how it gets so much view and good ratings (maybe the author delete the bad ones or the people taste is degrading) First problem, the author sense is bad, all turns out cringe Second problem, I can see how annoying is ino gonna be, and it looks like forced feeling, moreover they're still just a kid, I think the author wouldn't be good at writing romance Third problem, the MC is just too op in short time that I feel like reading 3rd rated chinese fic and much other problem. It's my honest and reasonable review, please don't delete it Author.

Author could you put romance in the tags, I wouldn't have spent 10 seconds deliberating if i should read this... Come on, no harem and romance!

It's great until about ch 130ish. The chapters started to become smaller with more filler and more word padding. At around ch150, the story progresses slower than a dead snail. I would say, either read it until you catch up or wait for this to have at least 1k chapters.

I don't like fics where little kids have reached Kage tier. Really wished you have written your MC to be 7-8 years older. Story would have been much more realistic. That said, the arcs in this fic are quite good. Especially the latest Kiri arc. If the above isn't an issue for you, then it's a good read. 5 star to update stability and story development. Keep up the good work. I'm glad I stuck despite the initial reluctance to read.

The writing is very good, but the fanfic itself leaves much to be desired. The plot is marking time, the characters are ordinary cardboard. In the 70 chapters that I read, not a drop of plot, forces rise endlessly. The author can underestimate his character, preventing him from doing useful actions for him. In one moment he is the smartest existence in the universe, and in another he is an autistic person with down syndrome. I'm done with it. (Google Translate)