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2023-06-12 14:22

I really enjoyed reading whats there so far (chapter 29) and I hope you continue to write this. It has like one or 2 small grammar mistakes a chapter but they are very small and in places where it doesn't really matter and beside that the story has excellent grammar (I'm very picky with grammar and just straight out won't read something with bad grammar), probably some of the best ive seen on Webnovel. The characters act like how they are supposed to and even side characters seem like actual humans. overal its probably my current favorite story and I really hope the author keeps up this amazing work.(the reason I gave it a 4.8 instead of a 5 is because I gave update stability a 4.)

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Thanks for the generous review!

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It's not generous if its true.

Capybarian:Thanks for the generous review!
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Gulf_Alpha_Yankee:It's not generous if its true.
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