The choice of vocabulary and the expressions are pitch perfect. Everything has been elaborately described that you don't miss anything. The story development is nice so far and it kept me hooked since it's so interesting! Not only can you understand the characters' way of thinking from text, the world background is also easy to imagine because of the clear usage of words. I like your way of writing author, keep it up!đ
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