Review Detail of AMonarch in Caged With A Vampire

I'm not going to lie to you and tell you this is the most magnificent thing to ever be created in this world. Honestly, this is a read you can pick up when you're bored and slowly grow to love. Only complaint is the inappropriate use of commas in certain areas. Characters could use a bit more emotion but it's not too much of a deal breaker. A little bit of editing could go a long way.