Review Detail of GionaLebraco in Darkened Daylight [MOVED]

Down with the first chapters and I like that the idea of the plot is already flashed before me by the start. I love the personality of the character, and the world-building is splendid. Grammar is good, and only minimal technical difficulties are noticeable. I just thought the story is starting tediously, but as you go deep into it, you'll find a gem. Good going!