the two chapters I've read are well written. the story is intriguing and captivating, especially the well-crafted grammar. now about the characters, the first two characters are alive. the author gave a detailed exposure to their way of life and attitude toward life—fantastic. in general, this story is attention-grabbing and has potential. good one author.
Miss_Elated03
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