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2022-05-12 00:13

Really high quality novel. Good writing and grammar and I really like the premise of the novel. I really hope to see more chapters released by the author. Peace and love.

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Cyclxne
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Thank you. <3

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Azrie
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The main appeal of this story is definitely the looming threats for the main character (Xuan), or Zero, as he finds himself at square-one all over again, while at the same time still needing to worry about the threats that existed to him when he was at the apex. Overall it's just incredibly entertaining to see what sort of reaction characters have towards his existence. I think if one finds the premise interesting they should definitely give it a go. The story starts off with a slow-build up of exposition, which might not be for everyone. However, that's just the start, it quickly begins getting interesting and has a few unexpected twists. The writing quality barely has any errors that I could find, at the same time it's easy to understand, as its been clearly edited before posting. So it's an easy read that won't make one scrunch their face wondering if they understood the sentence or not. The unexpected developments as well as the introduction of what Xianxia online is are quite nice and leave you interested on what happens with Xuan and how he'll approach his looming problems, Since even though everything should be straightforward it clearly isn't. One issue I have is that Xuan is a long-haired cultivator with ashen-white hair and red-eyes. Basically its not anything new, and to be honest it's not particularly relevant, so its easy to overlook. The world is interesting as we get to see glimpses of what Xuan's old life as Zero was, as well as his old acquaintances. I think that's the main highlight. Looking forward to whatever is going to happen between his past and his current situation. It makes for a great hook of anticipation.

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