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thechummygremlin
thechummygremlinLv151yr
2023-02-26 06:26

This novel started strong. While there were some parts I feel could have been explored a bit more, pacing was fine too. however, when the author started to copy\paste half of previous chapters, continuity and readability broke.

The lightning Descendant

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