Review Detail of Duku_GanRyu in Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

The idea for the story is great. the characters seem to be thought out and the Worldbuilding is stable. But there are many grammar errors. the promise and what the fmc is trying to do is very very confusing. So much so that no matter what explaination is presented for her actions later on it will still be extremly confusing because vital information is being left out in conversations and the motivations are very unclear.