The novel is so amazing! Just the blurb is enough to give you a hint of what's stored inside the entire novel. I like the way you write the story and characters. Awesome! good work, authorn

decent, it has good grammar and a very descriptive style of writing but somehow it just feels monotone to me, i read like 15 chapters and so far theres nothing that piques my interest,make my blood pump or make me giggle. i recomend the author to try and think about the way hes writing and potrayng his story right now as even from the first 15 chapters the actions the mc do and what hes saying feels somehow odd since whats hes thinking isnt what hes doing creating a somewhat inconsistent character, ontop of that although i respect the effort having a descriptive writing style doesnt meanto repeat certain things in different ways like for example its better to just make the main character Do the action than writing about the ideas of the main character and then explaining him doing it right after. I mean cant blame the author since the setting in general puts mc in a very uh how do i describe it... advatageus enviroment? the readers cant feel the chaos nor the panic/fear that is, whats gonna happen to the main characterr since he could just well... turn back timeee. welp sry for writing this but i do see a lot of potential in this novel as from a creative point of view its a 5/5 i personally enjoyed the world building. And oh writing the main character as being lost kinda annoys me as hes supposed to be a top tier agent. welp thats all

After reading the story is creative and flowing, the concept and plot are worthy imagining in your mind. The story is worth your time, so I recommend you to read, waiting for more chapters

The character of David as spy agent was nice,magical world and action loved Well written as English isn't your native language but still you had done very well Writing Quality is nice World Background is also very amazing I would like to recommend people who love spy agents and mission completing their struggles, action they should definitely try this interesting novel...keep writing author![img=recommend]

Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes off you. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God it's still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from you. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...

Interesting concept of using an espionage background. The plot is developing as it goes. The author doing a good job of making the story flow. Keep up the good work.

A thrilling story by any standards. the author is a genius with a crazy mind. this book is beyond words. I'm really impressed with character design and world background. kudos to The sage, another masterpiece from a master.