I actually really like the story so far. The story is going at a nice steady pace. Opening was kinda sad & tragic, but the shift from the male lead’s tragic story to female lead’s sad story was a good jump start into the story as we see female lead is mysteriously thrown into a new world. I like that the story allows you to get to know each character and explores the relationship they have with one another as the story progresses. We also get to learn about the male lead and getting to understand his journey and exploring his very complex mind. I like how female lead adapts to her new surrounding and like seeing the part she plays in helping to bring broken pieces of the puzzle together like a super detective, but I somehow believe she will become a very important part of this mystery herself. The old wizard and the fairy pairing are hilarious! Looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds. Loving the character development and your detailing of the surrounding environments and creatures are excellent - helps the reader to picture the story setting which is nice. Well done Author and keep up the good work 😊
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