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Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv155mth
2024-11-03 05:37

This is my comment when I saw the author ruined his novel. ------------------------------------------- This is where I drop. I can't believe you sprung this nonsensical poison on us 280 chapters in the story. Are you actually joking? He's willing to eradicate his birth family, the ones who raised and nurtured him. Just because they knew his secret. But for a bimbo who also knows his secret, who he's only known for a few years, he's willing to risk it all? Wasting resources to revive her? For what? Because he's human? I thought this was a novel about a demon general, not a romance fantasy about an anti-hero. You actually wasted my time. Why spring this on us 280 chapters in the novel. You could've been a decent author and let us know this would happen ahead of time. Somehow a ruthless dictator who's responsible for the deaths of millions in his past life, is willing to risk his shot at eternal life, just because of a bedwarmer. This is unimaginable levels of disgusting poison.

Rise of The Demon General

UnrivaledArcaner
3.9
461 Chs

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Mortimer_Darkbane
Mortimer_DarkbaneLv2

Thanks for the warning bro. And also for sacrificing your time reading this poison novel.

5mth
11
Skull_of_Life
Skull_of_LifeLv3

What? Of course, I felt that the novel had changed somehow during this time, but so on. Thank you for the warning.

5mth
2
Tribulation_MORTAL
Tribulation_MORTALLv11

Thanks for the warning and your sacrifice ❤️

3mth
1
Fang_Yuan10
Fang_Yuan10Lv13

Thank you for the warning i was almost gonna buy to unlock all chapters 💀

3mth
1
Bigkingman
BigkingmanLv14

You should’ve kept reading. I’ll just say she’s no longer apart of the story anymore. I felt the same way you did but the set up on how she left the novel was great. Read more bro promise you won’t regret it!!

2mth
Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15

Does he kill her? Yes or no? What chapter is she eliminated in.

Bigkingman:You should’ve kept reading. I’ll just say she’s no longer apart of the story anymore. I felt the same way you did but the set up on how she left the novel was great. Read more bro promise you won’t regret it!!
2mth
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Justin7Lucifuge69
Justin7Lucifuge69Lv2

This novel is a breath of fresh air after seeing all that harem and hero plot being copy pasted I'm sick of reading same plot everytime this novel is based on realism like when a rational thinker reincarnates in anouther world he will surely take the same path as mc. Few things I don't like is how prideful mc is he will take risk just to kill someone who humiliated him as the saying goes "showing off is a fools idea of glory". What I love alot about this novel aside from evil mc is that the pace is so good it's like reading from a professional author because unlike some others your not sucking your novel dry and the pace remains steady which always keeps us the readers wanting more of it. I recommend this novel to everyone.

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VenerableDemon
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Giving 5 stars just cuz of the #villain tag. I've stopped reading after a few chapters as I hate waiting for updates. So will wait till more chapters are there before reading. Hopefully Mc is actually evil and not some trash antihero

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Charlzie
CharlzieLv4

This Novel had so much potential but was ruined by every character that isn’t an ally of the MC. Nobody uses their brain unless they’re on the MC’s side. Every character is his enemy as well, haven’t seen a single neutral character yet except a clan leader but that’s the minimum he’s 400 years old. Everyone else just slanders the MC and basically 20% of the dialogue of this novel (free chapters) is just random characters insulting the MC for no apparent reason at all, (6 Year old MC btw) (he’s not even 6 yet but that just makes it worse) Anyways, unless someone tells me this nonsense stops I can’t bring myself to pay just to read something that is clearly triggering me….

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VenerableDio
VenerableDioLv13

If you like a ruthless apathetic and emotionless MC this is you. what I enjoy most about this novel is that there is no ROMANCE!! well..so far at least (Idk if this counts as a spoiler... I don't think so). Highly recommend reading this book, I am still here waiting for the next release, I never do that I just hope for the next novel. I love everything, I put all my daily power stones into this, it's unfortunate I used three days to read it. if it was one of them 1000+ novels, I would even use an audio reader to listen to this at work. This is what the author of the book just did hehe

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KIING
KIINGLv14

No romance/harem, no hero type MC. The MC is smart and the story is really good. These kinds of novels are extremely rare so you can consider this a hidden gem. More people need to read this. Also, the grammar is good for those that are really bothered by that. I hope the author does not drop this. Keep it up!

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Juuzou_Suzuya_3801
Juuzou_Suzuya_3801Lv1

A good novel, but the free chapters are few, so it only deserves one star A good novel, but the free chapters are few, so it only deserves one star

2yr
Bigkingman
BigkingmanLv14

This novel is absolutely fantastic! It has everything I’ve been craving in a story. I’m a total hater of hero books, and this one completely gets rid of them. No redemption arcs, no team-building, no saving someone from a level 60 beast when you’re only level 30. Nope, this story is all about a selfish MC who’ll do anything to climb the power ladder. And I’m here for it! You don’t find books like this these days.

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drunken_master55
drunken_master55Lv13

be warned, this author is a simp. he loves being a simp... at least that's what this story tells me.

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CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2

If excessively arrogant characters who pick fights with little kids is not annoying then this won't bother you... but this is enough to lower my rating (minus 2 stars) Otherwise there is nothing amazing or terrible just another generic xianxia... I had hoped the mc would elevate the novel... I'm still waiting (hopefully things will change) Besides my pet peeve the novel is good... give it a try

2yr
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