Review Detail of AMikaela_18 in King Of Life

Regarding writing quality, I think that you can still improve it. It's readable, but sometimes, I have to reread it to fully understand what it meant. In character design, I am yet to find out the character's background so I gave it three stars. The character is quite relatable, especially with the part where he first woke up and realized he's isekai'd. I gave four stars for the world background because of the explanation of the world where he ended up in the chapter. It's just the first chapter but I gave four stars for the story development, it's with the hope that the story develops in a way that the author will feel rewarded in every chapter she writes. For the stability of updates, I don't know how often you will update but I'd like to believe in you, so I gave it five stars. Good luck on your writing journey!