Good read! I thoroughly enjoyed the author's inventiveness and well-timed comedy! The characters are memorable and well-flushed out, I definitely recommend it.

To be completely honest, the grammar is quite messy. Although its still readable, there are some parts that are unnecessary so u should work on that. This is easily improved by time so its not a big deal. Story wise, it's decent and interesting. Overall, just continue writing and writing cuz "repetition is the mother of learning".

author's imagination is great, and writings are detailed. names are simple and rememberable, plot is also interesting, overall it's good read.

This story is absolutely amazing! The characters are well-thought and humor is delivered tactfully. The grammar use some work since the narrating and dialogue are a little choppy, but all in all this Novel has potential!

Giving this a five star rating because why not? This is a really good book and I highly recommend it to new readers. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

This is book is really great and it has potential to be really good overall. The story is phenomenal and the characters are very awesome. Would read more if there are any updates!

A thrilling story by any standards. the author is a genius with a crazy mind. this book is beyond words. I'm really impressed with character design and world background. kudos to the author, a masterpiece is at work here.

The story is good. However, it needs proper formatting. And it needs a lot of editing. But other than that, it has a good story with potential definitely.

Hoping to see more of this story....it really interesting.....👍👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍

Regarding writing quality, I think that you can still improve it. It's readable, but sometimes, I have to reread it to fully understand what it meant. In character design, I am yet to find out the character's background so I gave it three stars. The character is quite relatable, especially with the part where he first woke up and realized he's isekai'd. I gave four stars for the world background because of the explanation of the world where he ended up in the chapter. It's just the first chapter but I gave four stars for the story development, it's with the hope that the story develops in a way that the author will feel rewarded in every chapter she writes. For the stability of updates, I don't know how often you will update but I'd like to believe in you, so I gave it five stars. Good luck on your writing journey!