Review Detail of SuXen155 in Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

I want to be frank. I love this story. I have a little problem with the mc and his instability, but the biggest i have is that the writting is bad. For me, there is some miss in the text. But the story, and the world background is insane (in the good term). I really love this story. I just hope the author can rewrite the previous chapter because they are a bit missing. (I don't know who and when some character talk, it seems some info miss... i just want that text being more readable)