Review Detail of WN1 in Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read. The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels. I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.