Might just be me but I feel like the story goes a bit too fast like you don’t have time to absorb one info than 10 other are hurled at you Also there is some incoherence from there to there Like he want to be a pro gamer you make him seems like a badass art Martial good gaming sense all that but the reason he couldn’t be one was big guild occup hunting spot Imo if he really wanted to be one (pro gamer) with those skills he could have just joined a guild especially when his background story make him dirt poor but having high expenses
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