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SSNB237Lv152yr
2023-03-31 06:01

*I've written this review after finishing chapter 216.* I really enjoy the world and the idea of the story, but the characters involved ruin it for me. The mc is always saying that he's the strongest and he only uses some percentage of his power and in the next fight, he whines about being powerless. When he was supposed to have shown crazy power in a fight he immediately says that other people are catching up to him. He is also a mixed bag of emotions. One second he says that he doesn't need anyone and he can take on the world by himself and he hates everybody. The next he cries to one of the many ladies that throw themselves at him that he needs love and trust. He literally treats everyone else in the novel like trash and then they all fall in love with him because he's strong even though he is a disgusting, abusive psychopath and they all admit it every so many chapters. Maybe I'm just worked up because chapter 216 brought this to a point for me, but either way, I can't keep reading.

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Anone
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Anone
AnoneAuthor

they fall in love? I'm sorry it hasn't been Ann enjoyable read for you. this is not a harem novel, but it seems i might have made it seem like such. as for the flux of the main character's character ..... he's ultimately still human. the idea is to show he has conviction but hes not above insecurities like the rest of us. as for being a psychopath .....yeah thats also the idea, Cole is not meant to be a good person. he cares for his own, but he is no bleeding heart and would do anything to Achieve his goals regardless of who he has to sacrifice.

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FTLnovaKid
FTLnovaKidLv13

Seems like you didn’t even read the review. 😅

Anone:they fall in love? I'm sorry it hasn't been Ann enjoyable read for you. this is not a harem novel, but it seems i might have made it seem like such. as for the flux of the main character's character ..... he's ultimately still human. the idea is to show he has conviction but hes not above insecurities like the rest of us. as for being a psychopath .....yeah thats also the idea, Cole is not meant to be a good person. he cares for his own, but he is no bleeding heart and would do anything to Achieve his goals regardless of who he has to sacrifice.
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Anone
AnoneAuthor

i did, my aim when iIstarted this novel was to write a polarizing character with a personality in flux due to the situation he finds himself in. I want him to grow, so he has to be flawed. it would continue this way as he grows more.mature and develop more understanding.as for his arrogance thats's on purpose. and his erratic emotions and lack of consistency is also on purpose. I'm sorry this novel wasn't as good for you but I'm grateful you could read this far. thanks so much for giving this a chance

FTLnovaKid:Seems like you didn’t even read the review. 😅
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FTLnovaKid
FTLnovaKidLv13

I didn’t even read the book, but the review did turn me away and if you are saying the review is correct I am glad I didn’t start reading it. You are able to do what you want. But that kind of character will turn many away.

Anone:i did, my aim when iIstarted this novel was to write a polarizing character with a personality in flux due to the situation he finds himself in. I want him to grow, so he has to be flawed. it would continue this way as he grows more.mature and develop more understanding.as for his arrogance thats's on purpose. and his erratic emotions and lack of consistency is also on purpose. I'm sorry this novel wasn't as good for you but I'm grateful you could read this far. thanks so much for giving this a chance
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HumansLastWish
HumansLastWishLv1

Dear we come here for fantasy not for realty ,Yeah i also turn away from this novel i mean why does even author has to show character growth like first show him like worst of himself then slowly makes him great i mean its the starting of novel that hooks the reader to your novel and because the mc is flawed then many just turn away i mean take shadow slave mc he also have growth but not even a single person hated him in any chapter .

Anone:i did, my aim when iIstarted this novel was to write a polarizing character with a personality in flux due to the situation he finds himself in. I want him to grow, so he has to be flawed. it would continue this way as he grows more.mature and develop more understanding.as for his arrogance thats's on purpose. and his erratic emotions and lack of consistency is also on purpose. I'm sorry this novel wasn't as good for you but I'm grateful you could read this far. thanks so much for giving this a chance
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