Review Detail of Gre_y in The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess

Mediocre is the only thing I can say about this book, but I'll got deeper to not start fights. Keep in my mind I only got to about 30 chapters before I had to drop this due to that fact that I couldn't handle the grammatical errors. Writing Quality: 2/5. Only reason why it isn't lower is because I've seen worse. The errors in the sentences ruin my reading experience and I really can't focus. Author. I know that maybe English is your 2nd language but i you just take your time to edit your past errors, it will improve and attract newer readers. P.S: Grammarly is F R E E btw. Stability of Updates: 5/5. The only good thing about this book I guess, at least 1 chapter a day I think. Story Development: 2/5. Take this with a grain of salt since I have no idea how good the later chapters are. Let's talking about the prologue, haha...it's horrible. Plot seems forced, not very well thought out. I get that the Father wanted to to 'humiliate' and 'control' the families by marrying them to Alex, but there are like 5 other fucking sons. Also, using the same words when you can just make it easier for yourself by specifying it. An example would be when the women were going to sacrifice some of their lifespan. There is no need to repeat this, just say how much and you're done. Plot could've been better honestly, there might be more plot holes but I'm not going any further. Character Design: 2/5. We got the whiny woman, yandere woman, etc. Names give identity, the names you give your characters aren't even original, especially for the gods. The mc is unoriginal, even chinese novels do better LMAO. World Background: 2/5. I didn't go that far but when you're creating independent kingdoms, why talk about how the peace was broken once yadada died just to instantly be controlled again. Opinion: I think you should work on your grammar, think about what you're going to write, and use your imagination. I have no idea why this has such a high rating but I guess its because webnovel users are completely braindead.