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2022-07-09 23:32

deleted last review cause of inappropriate words..... so here I go with some manners. great novel, intriguing premise of a drunken faced mc. all 45 chapters in. love the way you handled the mc origin story, detailed but not rushed or any info dump, it showed he's drive and what made him lin donghai and it transitioned well into his next world great combo of brain and brawn swell guy, never a dull moment around the kid the underworld ride. doesn't stink of self righteousness. great read, and an advice for author 2 words

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Thanks for this gorgeous-looking review. I can't appreciate you more for this. Have a great day, bruv!!!!!

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