Item: When the Reader Descends Into the Novel With a System
Rating: 4.8
Author: ShadowKatake

ShadowKatakeLv42yr

2022-06-19 03:52

Writing Quality: This is so high tier! I don't know what to say. I had expected it to be a newbie author but no, his novels are just underrated. Story Development: In summary, a story about a transmigrator with no memories of his past transmigration but due to his system, he synchronized it with his current transmigration. A unique and new concept, I might add. Character Design: In the early chapters, it was mostly the story narrating the MC so I can't say anything about this other than the MC being a relatable one as he is also a voracious reader. Updating Stability: No problem here. Author updates daily. World Background: It was explained in the prologue. Quite intriguing I might add. A supercontinent that was divided into two for two opposing factions. Nothing wrong here. Overall: An underrated novel. For a moment there, I have mistaken this as written by a top author. There is also no noticeable problem in grammar. I suggest you read it before judging it.

When the Reader Descends Into the Novel With a System

WorthyAdversary

4.7

97 Chs

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WorthyAdversaryAuthor

This is the author's shameless review! The first 10 chapters will be setting up the background for the story so that there are no plot holes, so try to stick with the story until after the first 10 chapters before dropping. If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.

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RighteousFilthLv14

This is a great novel I'd say, author's concept is delving an inspiration into me. I like the world building and the characters seem lovable too with a lot of potential. I love the background especially, the world building, I can't wait for the story to go further and to see how characters relation will affect the world. Good work authot

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Lu_ShuiLv14

Hi Worthy! The world background is complex, kudos to you for thinking about the details. The world that you created is very complex and kudos to you for thinking about a lot of details. Unfortunately, you fail at simplifying it in order to allow readers to follow. After 16 chapters, the MC has not done much but I have practically read an essay about Esgardia. Try to spoonfeed your readers with info while focusing on what you want the reader to know at certain points of the plot instead of writing a long essay about Esgardia. It would help extremely to know what is it that the MC is trying to achieve in the end. What went wrong with the original Kurayami's life? What is the MC's general plan? Also I felt that the MC doesn't have much of a consistent character. It is difficult to find him interesting. And you should avoid the POV switches after only a paragraph or two. Try to make a point every time you switch because else why would you switch? Would also help to mention trigger warnings for gore and violence in the summary. Good luck with the novel!!!

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ESDEATH_2Lv4

kind of boring and streched out not my thing

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Chibi_ZuobaiLv4

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ArklainneLv1

It's good, but it lacks descriptive thoughts and more originality, overall it's okay and it really gets better at 11. Nice. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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luk_gfgLv1

Tbh I don't have the words t describe this absolute masterpiece

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Brian_Hanes_117Lv1

The story seems interesting, there is a lot of thought that goes into the characters, updates seem consistent, writing is good, and there is tons of content. I would like to see a bit more description about what the characters look like and on what the setting is like. I'd also like to just see a bit more dialogue among the characters in the beginning. The world building is next level though.

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