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Rating: 4.6
Author: Nekotakuu

NekotakuuLv12yr

2022-07-15 10:50

This story have potential, it is interesting and prose The things are well placed characters personalities are defining. You are doing nice work~~ Keep up the good work author, I'll be reading

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Plafu

Not enough ratings

109 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies4

NekotakuuLv1

In synopsis mother who live in china* Not which live in china

2yr

PlafuAuthor

Fist of all thank you for your feedback and second I know that is not the best I’ not good with grammar and it is not even my main language but still thanks for your f eedback

Nekotakuu:In synopsis mother who live in china* Not which live in china

2yr

KinshikanataLv2

Author you can try website call Grammar look up When used with grammarly and docs it is very good for editing

Plafu:Fist of all thank you for your feedback and second I know that is not the best I’ not good with grammar and it is not even my main language but still thanks for your f eedback

2yr

PlafuAuthor

i alrady use it but still thx f or the tip

Kinshikanata:Author you can try website call Grammar look up When used with grammarly and docs it is very good for editing

2yr

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StellaReadsLv2

i started reading this thinking it is an average gaming novel but the potential and way it is written make me believe it can go up to the level of King's avatar, but on the other hand grammar need a lot of work, use grammarly and write on Google docs it will help alot, am rooting for you and cheering ready for more chapters 🍁🍁

2yr

OtonaritenshiLv2

the story is good grammar can be problematic a bit, but we ain't here for English diploma are we~~ the protagonist is relatable, the game seems fun overall a good read

2yr

ArtisanOfInfinityLv2

I was recommended this story by a friend and it is amazing to see something fresh on web novel. You are doing a great job author even though it seems to be your first novel keep up the good work all the best!!

2yr

KinshikanataLv2

Pros- Good plot Likeable characters Good game mechanics Regular updates Bing watch worthy Cons- grammar in some chapters Some transition Either way I am enjoying it very much all the best writer

2yr

GifflarGodLv14

i just started reading but the story seems intersting, just that the grammar is too bad. i would suggest using grammarly. even the free version would help. I hope you will get an editor. if you can't find one (which is really easy to find) i could also offer to be an editor for the novel.

2yr

Random_Lurker5293Lv1

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IlesLv13

good story keep Going Mann[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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