Just learn about how to write dialogues in WebNovel by reading other novels and then you are good. Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

We're off to a very interesting start in the tumultuous kingdom of QEANIA. I really like the ways the characters are presented and the descriptions used in this story alongside the pulling emotional moments that get you immersed. Mage Luke is a personal favorite already. I think with some editing this will be a very high-quality read. Can't wait for more, keep up the great work!

Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work

Ahh....so great and best work!!! I got emotional only by reading the proluge and couldn't wait reading the book. I love the FL, Kyra. The writing style as well as the character settings is amazing.... Hope to read more of the work! Keep updating author and we will keep Reading!!!

From the start the writer has created a world of mystery, drama and intrigue. So much details about the history of these Royals keeps the reader hooked and wanting to know more. So far the story had been very promising. Keep those updates coming [img=update]

Lovely 😍 I love the way the story plotting is being unwrapping so far ❤️ It's giving me the urge to continue reading it more and more 😃 Keep up the good work dear author😇 Thank you for uploading such a nice story. I see the book's taking part in WSA contest ❤️ All the best dear author

I really like the vibes the MC gives. The world background is very vivid and the plot is lovely. I have to say this is a really nice piece from the author.

The novel undoubtedly has a great premise and the way author writes makes you even more curious about the story. Although there are numerous grammatical mistakes that make it hard to focus on reading, it's getting better in the latter chapters. Kudos Author!

There are quintuple of facts about this book which can easily get a reader hooked on the look, inside out. The plot, the settings, chemistry and interaction between the characters. Everything is done smoothly and well. I'm looking forward to read what's yet to come!!

The story is good; I like historical romances, and the plot and characters in this story are appealing. The author's writing style is good and understandable, but it could use a little editing here and there, nothing major to disrupt the flow of the story. I cannot say further since I only read the first few chapters, but this book has a lot of potential. Best wishes!