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aoi_hoshi_cath88
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2022-07-16 22:28

WRITING QUALITY: There were no problems with the writing and grammar as the storyline is done smoothly in which your reading experience would also be as similar with it. CHARACTER DESIGN: Our MMC's depicted in this story are supernatural beings (vampires and ghouls and others), which are given with a special kind of twist in their portrayals. Aside from the main characters who play their important roles in the story, there were also supporting characters which added more depth in the significance of the two main leads. STORY DEV'T.: From the synopsis and the premise itself, I have to say that this is another unique touch on the fantasy genre on vampires and other supernatural beings; coupled with the gore, suspense, horror; with a bit of romance, too, which hooks you up just from the get-go. What made me glued also in this story is because of the co-dependence relationship between the main protagonists that would make your curiosity intensified to know more about the mystery behind their co-existence. WORLD BACKGROUND: The setting made behind all of the relevant portrayals of our characters here and of the intense, mysterious events that took place could easily be visualised; as every thing is clearly described and illustrated with the apt words in its delivery. UPDATING STABILITY: No issues with the updates as it is scheduled with two updates per day so this is quite good for me. OVERALL, I have to say that this is my kind of read as this falls under one of my favourite genres. And I highly recommend this if you are a fan of anything about vampires and other related stuff about them.

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DollyRoma
DollyRomaAuthor

Wow such a detailed and lovely review! 😍 I’m happy to so far not be a disappointment 🙈 Thank you for all the support and help you’ve showered me with…I truly appreciate it 💝

aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15

P.S. MMC's should be MCs. I hope in the next WN app update there's an EDIT feature where you can edit your comments or review even after posting as it is so tedious to type again when you would be able to edit it instead of deleting then retyping it. 🙄

aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15

Anytime, dear 🥰 I think I have to make another set of reviews for more than 5 other books bcs I have already passed the mark beyond the 20th chapter required before making a review. I also have one to five under the ML category, too; which I have liked. 😬

DollyRoma:Wow such a detailed and lovely review! 😍 I’m happy to so far not be a disappointment 🙈 Thank you for all the support and help you’ve showered me with…I truly appreciate it 💝
DollyRoma
DollyRomaAuthor

Woah! Good luck! 🤭

aoi_hoshi_cath88:Anytime, dear 🥰 I think I have to make another set of reviews for more than 5 other books bcs I have already passed the mark beyond the 20th chapter required before making a review. I also have one to five under the ML category, too; which I have liked. 😬
DollyRoma
DollyRomaAuthor

Yea…I’ll definitely suggest that if I get another survey

aoi_hoshi_cath88:P.S. MMC's should be MCs. I hope in the next WN app update there's an EDIT feature where you can edit your comments or review even after posting as it is so tedious to type again when you would be able to edit it instead of deleting then retyping it. 🙄
Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv13

And I’m yet to do one 😭😭

aoi_hoshi_cath88:Anytime, dear 🥰 I think I have to make another set of reviews for more than 5 other books bcs I have already passed the mark beyond the 20th chapter required before making a review. I also have one to five under the ML category, too; which I have liked. 😬
aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15

so far, this is the 4th one I have made a review; based on my count I know there's five more I have to give a review next to this. Even in the ML group; I also have chosen at least 5 to 6 with the different genres that I have done with reviews last year: HISTORY, KINGDOM BUILDING, VIDEO GAMES, MAGIC, MYSTERY, REINCARNATION, SYSTEMS, and TRANSMIGRATION. What I've seen a breath of fresh air in the FL category is there's a book on REALISTIC FICTION and TRANSMIGRATION.

Akira_Monadelle:And I’m yet to do one 😭😭
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