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RogueMMLv131yr
2023-04-06 20:16

Book started off really well but the plot is aimless now. Female lead is strong but not smart. She is helpless

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JHeartAuthor

I appreciate your feedback. Two lifetimes considered, Neveah is just eighteen, young and inexperienced. The tale centers on her growth while highlighting the imperfect process.

Bexx_Lv15

I’ll have to respectfully disagree. The author did a great job with Neveah’s character. She wouldve lost her charm if she was flawless and invincible! I think what’s important to note is that shes 18, a victim of severe abuse and inexperienced in many areas. But she has an abundance of potential. She’s smart, quick witted, and has endless determination to change her circumstances.

RogueMMLv13

I dropped it in the end. Reincarnation stories need to emphasize on growth and the MC didn't change.

Bexx_:I’ll have to respectfully disagree. The author did a great job with Neveah’s character. She wouldve lost her charm if she was flawless and invincible! I think what’s important to note is that shes 18, a victim of severe abuse and inexperienced in many areas. But she has an abundance of potential. She’s smart, quick witted, and has endless determination to change her circumstances.
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