So far so good, I’ll rate it: Writing Quality- 8/10, errors here and there but it’s fine Updating Stability: 9/10, daily uploads even if a day was missed Story Development- 9/10, solid and author’s managed to introduce an antagonist early without it seeming forced or too fast Chara Design- I can’t really comment on it yet, but it’s been solid so far, 7/10 World BG- 10/10, loving it Overall good book TL;DR: Great book about Hindu Mythos, and what are you waiting for reading this, just dive in!

The obligatory author's review but I also want to take this opportunity to welcome you all. I hope you all like not only the story but also the world that I am building here. My hope is to create an immersive fantasy land based on my Hindu roots and culture. I am a huge fan of mythology; so that is where I will draw heavily from but in its core, this is a fully fantasy fiction with original characters. I hope you all accompany me on this wild ride.

Hindu mythology is very rarely seen here so I really root for your work. And the fact that you used Indian terms makes this book more catchy. I hope you will make it till the end. Good Luck!!

Finally something different from other eastern novels with only Chinese myths and legends I've always been interested in Hinduism and the way it is portrayed in this book is awesome Hope to read more author

finally a book based on Hindu pantheon and I am hella excited for this one. The first 4 chaps are a wild ride. The author has a solid grip over the grammer, it is presented in a very good way, teh prose flows very smooth. waiting for new chaps. keep up the good work author

Reading the first five chapters left me speechless. The fact that one could picture a fantasy world this easily just by reading words is something a few people can do, but this author emerged like a waterfall in a desert. I hardly spot mistakes, it's either because I was intoxicated in the story or there is rather too little errs in the book. But this book is WOW! It keeps you reading more with beautiful cliffhangers. I wish I could be this good one day 🖤 I'mma keep digging harder. More popcorns please

I'd like to commend the author's way of handling the story. I also noticed that the author observes proper syntax or quality writing. It reeked of good writing quality as I finished reading up until Chapter 3. Just try to cut your long paragraphs if can be. Sometimes, this can really bore your readers who don't like reading this type of style. Nevertheless, I love it. This was honestly my first reading a Hindu-related mythology story. Props to the author for doing his research on this story, giving information at every end of the chapter for words that may seem vague. Keep it up! Looking forward to this!

I can't put te book down. Like, this was my dream to read such a book, and you actually dared to write it here. I wish you can win the first place so that everyone can learn about the beauty of Vedic times. So good! your descriptions are so amazing. I can already imagine what Amaravati City looks like now. Great work!

Good job author, you improved chap after another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work