Item: Lost Soul: Nine-tailed Fox's Transmigrations!
Rating: 3.6
Author: IrgendeinTyp

IrgendeinTypLv152yr

2022-07-03 08:16

I really like the concept/ world this is set in. But I stopped at the paywall. The story just wasn't enticing enough for me to spend the 10 coins per chapter. The system always puts the MC in situations that could be easily avoided and then laments the MCs incompetence. For example aura. Apparently the Mc is a walking pheromone fountain which causes everybody to go crazy for her and and even causes her to be wanted in the entire universe because the dragon king got the hots for her. It could've been easily avoided if the system just told her but it didn't because of "reasons". Also the system constantly mocks her for not being able to read or get the common sense of this universe she just got chucked into. And not in a nice banter way, moe of a demeaning way, calling her stupid. (I don't think the author wanted it to come across that way but it definitely does.)

Lost Soul: Nine-tailed Fox's Transmigrations!

SB_Moon

4.8

289 Chs

Liked by 7 people

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SB_MoonAuthor

Thanks for the review. As for the reason why the system can't disclose infos to her it's because she needs to know everything on her own. the system is there to help her level up, not to become her nanny and explain everything. it could help in certain matters but regarding the new concepts FL nerds to find out on her own as for why she can't learn anything and being called stupid the actual reason is a spoiler which will be revealed in the future thanks for giving it a try.💕

2yr

Dao_Of_PatienceLv14

Yes, but calling her stupid gives the reader the impression that she is stupid. It does not encourage the reader, but rather irritates them with her stupidity as a college student. Although it may appear to you as a joke, to us readers who lack context and are looking for a good reason to stay and read the book, the main character's stupidity does not support that. In addition to all of this negative stuff happening at the beginning of the novel, you'll get to learn about the story you're reading and decide whether or not it's worth reading.

SB_Moon:Thanks for the review. As for the reason why the system can't disclose infos to her it's because she needs to know everything on her own. the system is there to help her level up, not to become her nanny and explain everything. it could help in certain matters but regarding the new concepts FL nerds to find out on her own as for why she can't learn anything and being called stupid the actual reason is a spoiler which will be revealed in the future thanks for giving it a try.💕

2yr

IrgendeinTypLv15

In this case you don't really see the MC as stupid tho... She just isn't given the information she needs and expected to perform as if she knew. Makes the reader detest the system, not the MC. (At least if the reader can emphasize with such a situation. I can and I despise people that do that to others.)

Dao_Of_Patience:Yes, but calling her stupid gives the reader the impression that she is stupid. It does not encourage the reader, but rather irritates them with her stupidity as a college student. Although it may appear to you as a joke, to us readers who lack context and are looking for a good reason to stay and read the book, the main character's stupidity does not support that. In addition to all of this negative stuff happening at the beginning of the novel, you'll get to learn about the story you're reading and decide whether or not it's worth reading.

2yr

MalthemuteLv15

It just seems like the story is written in a way that almost tries to push the reader away by speedrunning a bunch of tags rather than to let us learn about our 2/3 main characters and the world they inhabit. Heck, we haven't even seen a system screen in 21 chapters and although that's not inherently bad the system screen would shed some light on just what is happening.

2yr

SB_MoonAuthor

main story starts from vol 2.

Malthemute:It just seems like the story is written in a way that almost tries to push the reader away by speedrunning a bunch of tags rather than to let us learn about our 2/3 main characters and the world they inhabit. Heck, we haven't even seen a system screen in 21 chapters and although that's not inherently bad the system screen would shed some light on just what is happening.

2yr

Mr_noLv14

so you're saying to even get to the main story you have to read over 50 chapters spend over 280 coins you realize how ridiculous that is and it's not to mention how much time it will take to get to that point what percentage of people that try reading your book come close to that point in the story not trying to be rude but I don't see any logic in the way you set this up

SB_Moon:main story starts from vol 2.

10mth

SB_MoonAuthor

You can skip all these chapters but in the future, you won't understand many things. I don't want to spoil the story for others so I won't go into details here.

Mr_no:so you're saying to even get to the main story you have to read over 50 chapters spend over 280 coins you realize how ridiculous that is and it's not to mention how much time it will take to get to that point what percentage of people that try reading your book come close to that point in the story not trying to be rude but I don't see any logic in the way you set this up

10mth

Mr_noLv14

so your response for having a massive 50 plus chapters prologue having to spend over 280 coins before even starting the beginning of the novel is to just skip to the beginning and not understand anything and have to pay from the very first chapter please try to make sense of this for me

SB_Moon:You can skip all these chapters but in the future, you won't understand many things. I don't want to spoil the story for others so I won't go into details here.

10mth

SB_MoonAuthor

those chapters aren't prologue. the story started from the first chapter. I wrote the book in a different way so ... you won't understand if you don't read it.

Mr_no:so your response for having a massive 50 plus chapters prologue having to spend over 280 coins before even starting the beginning of the novel is to just skip to the beginning and not understand anything and have to pay from the very first chapter please try to make sense of this for me

10mth

Mr_noLv14

you said the story starts at volume two that means everything in volume 1 is prologue and you didn't reply to my other two points

10mth

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