Review Detail of NaeMiaw in Force to protect the Male Lead [BL]

I do not like rating something I have not read enough of, but the issue is, it looks to me like everyone with the means to judge what quality writing actually is has behaved the same way: dropping this after a few chapters and not reviewing to not hurt the reviews. I have still taken the time to check if the writing has improved, and as of the latest chapter, it looks like the author still struggles with tense sequencing. The first chapter currently has a comment saying this is not the worst, but painful at time. I, and 25 others agree. Since the reviews on this book are only 17 (and at least one is a chat gpt empty, meaningless attempt at commenting), it seems to me like the note of this book is in the end quite deceiving. The plot looks interesting, although cliché, there's nothing wrong with that. The MC seems childish at first, but I unfortunately do not possess the wherewithal to read enough to see if his character actually develops. I see hints of BL tropes I do not personally appreciate (MC as a placeholder for a FL, stereotyping of gay relationships, etc), but I can't say for sure for the same reason as above. Overall, this has potential, but for pity's sake, author, get it beta-read and edited before publishing. It would be a shame to keep discouraging readers because of a language barrier.