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AMonarch
AMonarchAuthor2yrAMonarch

NO HAREM! Narrator: “A flock of readers fly away at speeds unheard of. It might even be considered a scientific miracle as it challenges the very laws of physics within our universe. Truly a spectacular sight.” Narrator: “Now for the few of you who remain, do you want to gain 10 inches in 2 places?” *Grins* Narrator: “Of course that increase would apply to your height and your muscles! Anyway, if you want that, read this novel! Return policy: you will not get your time back but I believe there’s no reason you would want that after reading this masterpiece!” _____________________________________________________________________ Author here, I hope that segment convinced you to read this novel but if it didn’t, I will list off some pros of this novel to see if they peak your interest but I’ll also list cons to watch out for in this novel to be fair. Pros: - Decent writing? - 40 chapters released in the first day - Occasional comedy - I try to read all the comments and reviews for insight on things to improve - Realistic mc - Good world building - Future arcs are already planned - If this goes premium, I want to keep the price of privilege chapters 1-5 coins for the first 1-3 months - Can write a lot (I can write a chapter pretty quickly then edit it which will take some time but I don’t have a problem with that. The only problem is that I need motivation for it which I get through how well a novel does so if you like this novel, please leave a comment or a review) Cons: - Bland side characters (until chapter 84) - I cannot write a good female character - Bad habit of killing off characters for mc’s character development Yes, I’ve listed more pros than cons because I want to keep at least a few readers. Happy reading everyone!

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Ninth9
Ninth9Lv14Ninth9

Ill give this a chance since you said no harem

CombatGod_ARES
CombatGod_ARESLv13CombatGod_ARES

Good

AMonarch
AMonarchAuthorAMonarch

Thank you so much! I’ve been a bit busy so I’ve been slacking on editing this novel but I’ll get back to it within 1-2 days!

Ninth9:Ill give this a chance since you said no harem
BlackDragon02
BlackDragon02Lv4BlackDragon02

umu,nice,no harem really fk nice