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Wannabe_Author367
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2022-06-09 21:56

This is a great story and I would think I have a great judge of story's. This story has a great storyline and it really pulls you in. Out of everything I think the story development is a little quick and kind of unnatural based in the circumstances that the characters have been through but other then that I think that this story has the ability to be one of the top story's on this app. Continue doing great author and you will have my support all the way to the end.

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Thank you very much, this means a lot to me:)! Also, I will take your advise and will try to make the story development a little slower but not too slow! 😄

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Shameless Author review! ;] Here is what you can expect from this book: 1. This is not a cultivation world but Earth in the future with apocalypse elements (Not right from the start but from the 2. volume), video game elements, and fantasy elements filled with action, adventure, myths, beasts, creatures and a bit of romance. 2. The MC is average but perceptive and a fast learner. He is not menacing nor a loser, but as the story goes on he will slowly learn how to become an antihero. Also, the MC is not a genius, so don't except him know everything! That's where other characters come in! 3. This story's first volume is just an appetizer, like a tutorial that shows our MC and the world how things work before throwing them right into the middle of the chaos, which starts at volume 2! 4. (Con) At the start the pace may seem fast, not insanely fast, but from chap 40 it slows down, but not too slow. Though, even like that until chap 40, I am sure you will enjoy it just as much as after it! :] 5. English is not my first language but I always try to improve so if you see mistakes make sure and feel free to point it out so I can correct them. (Without any toxicity of course.) 6. Update is around 1 chap a day, but if I see you kind readers like the story, (Ps or Summoning Pens) I will upload more, around 1-3 chaps, depending on how much support I get and how much time I have on my hands. 7. If you are curious about whether this is a harem or not, yes, there will numerous waifus, three to be specific. As for if he ends up with all of them? It will depend on the majority of you. (Though, don't expect 5+ girls drooling after MC, this is not that type of story.) 8. I am sure if you give a story a try you won't be disappointed! 9.Love you all, peace out!

IamMountTai
IamMountTaiLv13

UNDERATED- Overall rating 4.8/5 (I'm lenient when I review) SHORT CRITICAL REVIEW- Read 118 chapters As of the time I'm writing this, it's been 4 months. The amount of recognition this work is getting is pitifully low for what it deserves. It's a solid read for webnovel standards. The story develops quite nicely and besides the beginning which is a little slow, the pacing is good. There are many interesting ideas in the novel and the author does well to execute them. Many novels on here have interesting ideas, but the execution tends to fail. Here, it's quite clear and well explained. I'm not really sure why this novel isn't popular. Perhaps its because some people think its similar to Supremacy Games? (I haven't read that so I can't comment) Maybe it's the little slow start? The other point I could think of would be characters. Personally, I am pleased with the MC of this story. Kind, Silly, Misfortunate, kind of a gag character because of his gambling addiction, Naïve (which he grows out of), perhaps these traits shove away people expecting a ruthless, cold, selfish, anti-hero-like character, pragmatic character, survival of the fittest because the story is a survival game which people expect. It's a shame. It's refreshing to have a more morally good character in such a story. The Mc is very close to his family and has shared his secrets with them (Father and little Sister), which I suppose some people don't like because it's 'Stupid'. Yes yes indeed but not every mc can hold such burdens or secrets within their heart. The MC here actually feels much more human. I've also noticed that some people don't like the Little Sister, but personally I quite like her. Brocon aside, having seen many characters like her in other works, she is much much more on the likable side. She can be seen as annoying, clingy, but readers fail to see that its a very close brotherly and sister relationship. She is executed well. I hope people are more willing to give this novel a shot. It really deserves better. Shipping wise, it is intended to be 3 potential love interests. 118 chapters in, there's only been 1 that has been having the screen time. The other 2 are up in the air in regards to if they have appeared or not. I am looking forward to it. Hopefully I get some romantic drama with 1 heroine winning at the end.

MajidX200
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