This is a great story and I would think I have a great judge of story's. This story has a great storyline and it really pulls you in. Out of everything I think the story development is a little quick and kind of unnatural based in the circumstances that the characters have been through but other then that I think that this story has the ability to be one of the top story's on this app. Continue doing great author and you will have my support all the way to the end.
Thank you very much, this means a lot to me:)!
Also, I will take your advise and will try to make the story development a little slower but not too slow! 😄